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lets see punk out inu and kik, check. stiring plot check. dark miko (or at least she grew up) kick ass sex scene check. yup this is good. goodies!!

your story is amazing, it started out as a sex slave then to love i love this kinds of story !!!! make a sequal if you can . ^_^

That so sweet *Cry* I'm always a big sap for a die hard romance. This is a great romance. You could have ended it so many ways but you choose a happy fairy tale ending.

Happy NewYears to you.

Wonderful ending. Loved the last line. Loved the lemon. And I loved the story. I'll be looking forward to your new story. Oh by the way, I can not believe Shiori! Ugh! I was so mad at her for doing that! But you had me reasured with this line "If not for those years apart I would not have appreciated the depth of my feelings as much and though it hurt I am glad that it happened as I have you now in my arms. I will love you until my dying day.”

Damn, now that's what a call a line.

OHHHHHHHHHHH what an awesome story. This was a great story to read.. I really enjoyed it.. Iam sad that it came to an end. But at some point it must. Glad you finished it.
I hope that you will write more stories.. I truly enjoyed the eading.. It was sweet..
Well take Care.. And here's my email so you can email me with other stories you will write later on.. And thanks for the great story to read..
marisennet@yahoo.com
Hope your holidays were good one's.. Enjoy the New Year..
Mari

Nicely done! Great wrap-up to a great story. I really enjoyed it. And I'm looking forward to more of your next one. Keep writing!

Loved this story. I appreciate any fic where Sesshomaru and Kagome come together but yours had a special combination of steamy lemons, drama, and finally (not to mention most importantly) a happy ending. LOL...Hope to see some more soon!

*sniffle* I'm such a sap. Unlike other stories, when Sesshoumaru confessed his love for Kagome, it felt right. *sniffle* Okay, so you've ruined me. I would have never read a romance novel and I think that this story comes pretty damn close. As always, your lemon was absolutely exquisite. And I don't use that term lightly. The ending was a nice touch. The children have a father and there is a new child. All warm fuzzies here.

Congratulations on finally finishing a story! That is one hell of an accomplishment. So many don't know how to do that. I had a very difficult time finishing my first story and it took some time for me to figure out how to do it. Awesome job!

Now, you are truly going to hate me. If you could, please write one last chapter. We have our sympathy for Kagome, but not for Sesshoumaru. You have left us wondering what happened when he went to see Inuyasha. We did not feel his anguish in his search for her. Also, the problem with Shiori has not been dealt with. Kagome is a very forgiving person. Yet, because of the importance of Kagome and the children nearly dying, Shiori needs to be made aware of the part she played in it. Kagome and Sesshoumaru need to confront her. Call it wrapping up loose ends. And there could be one final hunt reminiscent of the first, bringing us full circle.

Do you hate me yet? ^_^

Loved the story, excellent job, and again, congratulations on finishing it.

Snowfall

Vague,

love it