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Fucking Wow! I'm so speechless! This action whore is jumping for joy. And I love a heartbroken Sesshoumaru! He really fucked up. Gah! I am definitely reading that over again. Hey, I didn't notice any mistakes. I may later, but damn. I think that I'm going to hyperventilate. I haven't had a fix like that in forever. *breathe, breathe* Oh please don't let her lose the baby! OMG! That would break my heart. Of course, it sounds like she already lost it. *sobs* Okay, I'm off to read it again!

Snow

O_o Wha?? Please don't end it there! Maybe one more chapter? Please? Sesshy could use Tenseiga to revive her? Please don't end it there.

PLEASE?

Until we meet again.

Oh no what is going on!!! He has to be with her!! Please up-date again soon I have to know what happens next!!!

Good chapter but vague...i hope she just didn't die... i mean the line going flat...kinda freaked me out there i hope the baby's oki...who knows and what about sesshomaru can't wait to see HIS reaction and wait a min the paramedics know about youkai?? NOw that is something new! ohh i can't wait till the rest!!! keep it up! (you don't have to answer my questions :) i'm sure the next chpater will

I don't really consider Kag to be truly human any longer. There's no way she could go through all that powerful magic and time travel and be unaffected. There is no one exactly like her, and such beings tend to either be unable to breed at all, or their children take after the other parent. *shrugs* An Out for the hanyou pup plan, in case by some miniscule odds that you change your mind...(wacks self for stupid whining). I just like puppies. You should check out a story on A Single Spark called 'Tears of the Fallen',chapter 16 for cute Sess puppy antics! Anyway, I look forward to seeing where this story goes from here!

omg! thank you so much for writing i almost thought you were not going to write again and i began to panic* where is he? he needs to write !* yeah good job you should have another chase scene except a bit longer

A great chapter. A few spelling errors, but the plot more than made up for it. Please keep going, and update soon.

Awwww Man!!!

sooo intense~!!! can't wait for your update... always love the way you made it so HOT!

Ah, back again I see. I hope she really lets loose on him.... after they've been separated a bit. They both need to come to some realizations. I wonder if he'll accuse Yasha, but I also don't want the immature pup to know about her. (sigh) I don't like Hanyou. Too insecure and chaotic.... but so it goes. Thanks for the update!