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Oh dear, is that really the end? *cries* Sad!!
Thanks for sharing!

The words "oh shit oh shit oh shit oh shit" wont stop going through my mind. Talk about one of the worst cliffys ever! GEEZ! I'm going to be at odds end waiting to find out what happens next O.O!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

M

Hey my 20 yr old writer of supreme fiction. You had me in total meltdown mode. When you write it's as if you're right there with the action happening around you. I cried for Kagome. The tears made it so hard to read. I got angry at Sesshoumaru for being such a cruel and heartless ass and in the next moment I cried for him finally finding he actually has a heart that can feel the need for that ONE once in a lifetime mate. He really sould have just sat outside the door and waited. It's not like he's never just sat on his bum staring into oblivion before, you know? He could have maybe saved her from deaths door. Hmmm...so many possibilities. I do so hope you aren't going to leave this here. You've got quite a fan base going here. Me included. I'll be looking for more of your masterpieces{plural!!!}You're a mighty fine writer in my book. Oh and do go read Tears of the Fallen at A Single Spark, she too has a great talent. And Vyncent's work from there also. I could list you The Greats, but it's real long. Ta for now!!

Please don´t say it´s over!!!
Please!!!!!
I still don´t know who I should pity more...
If this has to be the end of the story, then at least you should write a sequel!!!
Sad endings are good and all but...
There are too many bad endings in the real world... so PLEASE don´t let it end like this!!!
I like your story the most anyway... it´s wonderful!

Wow! This is a great story! Pleas say it's not over yet

*~AlleyCat~*
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Omg......I never would of thought that the story would end like that! I'm shocked! why such an ending? * is crying* and what happened to sesshomaru? and was she bleeding because of the miscarrage? I have so many question i dont know where to begin! over all I'll have to say that this story was great! but still she died! * is in a state of shock* I hope your next one will be just as good, but with a happy ending!

Dawna Sama

PS. before you ask your self if i am disapointed, the answer is no, but still such a shocking ending!

Please write more. I really want to know what happenes. Keep up the good work with this story.

ehaaaaa!

...Please... For the love of all that is holy... Update soon! o.o

Your writing is truly amazing and your cliffhanger literally left my heart pounding! Definetly not fair of you. Anyway, just wanted to let you know that you've got me quite captivated >_<

wow, i liked that chapter, it was very exciting. Please update soon, i can't wait to see what happpens.