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November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the story, it's really good. Keep up the good work
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November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a chapter! Totally amazing. I hope she doesn't lose the baby. Great job. Update again as soon as you can, I am totally hooked!
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November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok...that's how it ended? Yeah...okay I am very dissapointed! I thought there would be a happy ending. Ugh you better warn your readers about that. Ok well it was a nice story until the ending. Sorry, it's my honest opinion.
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November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLease dont let Kagome die. Please
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November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
0.0 PREGNANT???!!!??!! Damn you love to shock your readers don't you? And what do you mean by "Tragic ending of our story"? Please don't tell me this story is over!! It's one of the best I've read in a long time and it has been a very long time since a good, long Sess/Kag story came up. Anyway, I hope this isn't the end of the story, it's an amazing piece of writing and I hope to read more soon.
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November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!! how could you leave it with that cliffy!? and such a horrible cliffy! That was such a sad chapter. I love it how you gave Sesshomaru an animalistic side. Where the hell is Inuyasha at? He should know how to find her in her time if he wanted to see her! Please update soon! I love it
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November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was so sad........ohh my god please update soon just cant wait
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November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! This just gets better! More soon, please? I just love your story and I can't wait to find out what happens next!!! I thought I'd outgrown this...I feel like I did when I was 14 and reading the Taran Wanderer series by Lloyd Alexander. I got the 1st 3 books for Christmas, read them Christmas Day then took my Christmas money and bought the remaining books the next day cuz I HAD to know how the story ended! And if your finished story could be bought, damn! I would buy it!!! Update soon, please?
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November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oops! my bad. girl, i was reading some your remarks at the beginning of your chapters...where the hell did you get the idea you couldn't write well? or that your story isn't good? yeah, it's got a lot of sex in it [and that just makes it more fun for everyone] but you're writing a good story. you're giving your characters personality and depth and making them interesting...we wouldn't keep reading if you weren't. my only critique is on a technical level, but i'm enjoying the story too much to be bothered with a technical critique. i just want to read more...
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November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! You can't just end it there. That is so evil. I just want to cry cuz I just want to know what's going to happen next. Please, please, pleeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssssseeeeeee! update very, very, very soon like yesterday. I can't wait to find out what happens next. By the time you do update, I'll have no nails left. That was a great chapter. You are amazing.