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for Eyes of a Hunter

by Vague

person beliefinkakashi
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The last chap left me with a huge cliffhanger... How could she die... A mischarage, how sad. Its all Sesshomaru's fault... grrrr... sure i love him and all, but the way he jumped to conclusions is just wrong...

You got me really excited when you uploaded chap 11, but that i found out that it was an authors note... how sad... *_* <<< i had stars in my eyes...

Cant wait for the next chap...
person Anon
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!She had a baby and she had a miscarriage,how sad.Sesshy will be extremly mad,I can feel it!lol.Don't worry about it hon.Everyone makes a mistake,im not mad.hah.Update soon,incredibly addicting story love : ]
person Metis
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I knew it wasn't over. It's just painful (to me and the characters) to guess what will happen next. Poor things...poor little puppy. (sniffle)
person Brittany
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well if its not over can you please post the next chapter soon iam like dieing here waiting for it I mean come on what i cliff hanger i almost died when that chapter ended. Aaah!! Any way be so kind and post soon. Ty.
britt
person Vyncent
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kami....So Intense...you have JUST GOT to update soon....PLEASE!
person madmiko
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me this isn't the end of the story! Or if it is, I sure hope you have a sequel in mind. There's just so much unresolved! And it's been so terrific so far! More, please!
person animealover
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please write a sequel!!!
I love it!!!
person Sweetcakes
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok now...the author notes have me confused. Did you end the story with this chapter? ARRRRGGGGHHHH!!!! I hope I just misinterpreted what you wrote. (I hope, I hope, I hope). I've got to say that I wasn't expecting this LITTTLE plot twist. A miscarriage? Is Kagome ok? Did she die too? Holy mackerel, I need more! Did you mean to use Shiori as a "shield"? She's Seshy's secretary (gotta go through them first), and she taking care of/protecting Kagome. Was that intentional? Or am I reading too much into her?

Please say that there's more to this story!!!
person angei..who?
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay.. so im just alittle confused with the ending of that chapter.. idk.. i know that is what you are probaly(?sp?) trying to go for..so shes dead? yeas??...haha but on a another note.. i liked the beginging.. yup.. update soon..for the slow people in the back (aka me).. !! update!1ahora!..lol
person Beck
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!! Wow.....that was...unexpected. She can't be dead can she. Please update soon for the sake of what little sanity i have left