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man you are so evil, but i understand totally why you started the beginning like that even though it made my heart stop and even a few tears appear. loved the real version as well too.

what the hell thats not nice... you nearly made me cry you meanie.

I like it. kept me insuspense. sitting on the edge of my chair for your next update.

that was funny playing a trick like that. i seriously thought she died and that was the end of the chapter,lol. Anywho i can't wait till you update again 'cause it's just starting to get interesting, atleast to me it is.

ja ne til next time

p.s. please don't stop writing 'cause you still have people like me who really enjoy this story ^-^

Ah, they can't let her and the baby die!! Oh, Sess has to save them!!!

haha omg wow i actually thought that kagome died... well haha this was a interesting chapt. keep updating it!

And here I thought the cliffhanger for the last chapter was bad. It just keeps getting better, and I'm still hoping for happily ever after. You're still doing a great job, so I can't wait til the next chapter.

YOU are a LITTLE STINKER!!!!! yes, i know i'm yelling at you! you deserve it! you're fake start to the chapter had me eeping and ohing all over the place. i was almost in tears!!!! BRAT!

of course, the real chapter did have me crying. [don't get excited, i cry over hallmark commercials.] Any road, how are you going to bring them together now, cuz you gotta. i understand your desire to end this quickly, i had the feeling that it was originally just a light piece of fluff, not more than just a few chapters, but your skill at weaving a story outdid you and you found yourself with a real story on your hands; with demanding readers too. aren't we a pain in the ass? but i have the impression that you're kind of rushing it to the end and that does no credit to the beginning of the tale, which was so well written. i do the same thing too. i guess this is the part that requires discipline, maybe writing down how you want the story to end and then going back over it to flesh it out. that has worked for me in the past. the brothers grimm had it easy, they just had to slap "and they lived happily ever after." at the end of their stories and boom! it was done! the truth is there are no happy endings; when you find that special person with whom you wish to share your time and space, it's more of a happy beginning because the adventure is just beginning...

gotta go, i talk too much. i love your writing but you're still a brat! [lol]

LMAO that was priceless! Even though you seemed to have a deathwish, but still hilarious.

YAY! She hasn't lost the baby yet, there's still hope, sin't there?! I really hope they both turn out fine! Why do the doctors say Kagome's trying to save the baby while her body's trying to kill it? Weird... Is it because of her miko powers? And I'm really dumbstruck at the way people know about youkai and talk of them so lightly in the future, I'd never seen anything like that in a canon fic before.

Hope you update soon!

Dirty dirty trick........i almost cried anywayz good chappie update soon k