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August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The beginning was great I turned on the fan to cool myself down. I mean who wouldn't with those three sexy hunks.
But OMG you can't leave it like that. I mean you just can't. isn't cliffhangers against the law or rules of fanfiction some like. You have to give us your most loyal and loving readers atleast another chapter something. (sobbing) how can you leave poor broken and busied Kagome in the hospital and hojo on the run.
I am begging you (Koimiko gets on her knees pleading and sobbing) PLEASE OH PLEASE
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August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn Kags is a lucky girl having the three guys at once but damn.. Houjo just had to be an ass didn't he? Hopefully she'll be alright, I hope you add more to this story. Keep up the good work.
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August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope that this isn't a one shot. i think there should be one more chapter.... to finish things....hehehehehehehehehehe
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August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Continue! Continuing is good! Yeah, she gave in rather quickly, but geez...that was hot. End it there? YOU CAN'T END IT THERE! At least write a paragraph saying "Hojo was beaten beyond recognition then castrated, while Kagome became a spirit detective" or something! I await the end of the story. Thanks! Good job.
~butterflysuki
~butterflysuki