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October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn girl! I was not expecting that and I hope you right more, even I wanna kick his ass!
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October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WAAAAAAA I WANT MORE PLEASE DONT MAKE THIS A ONE SHOT !!!I WANT MORE!!!!!!
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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've changed my mind. You should become inspired and continue this. I don't imagine the police will ever find Hojou, but it would be nice to see what happens to him (after K and H catch him and take him to the Makai for a little 'payback')
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September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So, I love the one shot and wish you
to make it longer and a full fledged
story with chapters and... you know.
I think you have something awesome
right here, so please update! Please!
to make it longer and a full fledged
story with chapters and... you know.
I think you have something awesome
right here, so please update! Please!
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YES PLEASE ADD MORE! THIS IS TOO GOOD TO BE A ONE-SHOT!!!
I REALIZE I'M TYPING IN ALL CAPS BUT I CAN'T STRESS MYSELF ENOUGH, EVEN WITH THE CAPSLOCK OF DOOM. I LOVE IT! ALL THREE OF THEM AND THAT ENDING WAS JUST GENIUS! YOU'RE A GENIUS! PLEASE CONTINUE, WRITE MORE, THIS IS TOO GOOD TO BE A ONE-SHOT!!!
I REALIZE I'M TYPING IN ALL CAPS BUT I CAN'T STRESS MYSELF ENOUGH, EVEN WITH THE CAPSLOCK OF DOOM. I LOVE IT! ALL THREE OF THEM AND THAT ENDING WAS JUST GENIUS! YOU'RE A GENIUS! PLEASE CONTINUE, WRITE MORE, THIS IS TOO GOOD TO BE A ONE-SHOT!!!
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September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was such a great idea/story! Nicely written, and if there were any errors, I was too caught up in what was happening in the story to notice XD However, the ending was cruel and evil and you really need to continue with it! Actually, I feel the same way about Fate's Mistake, but you've already said you don't plan on adding any to that. *sad* Well, in any case, keep up the great work, I can't wait to read works more by you!
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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is real good and I think you should continue. Just so I can see Hojo get his ass kicked to up and around his mother-fuckin ear. Yusuke's going to dump Keiko for Kagome right? Cause I hate both motherfuckers! (Hojo&Keiko) please update when you can.
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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was very good. I hope that maybe you'll change your mind and make it a full out fic or a two-shot atleast.
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September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you should do more than a one shot because this fic can't end like it >_<
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September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! That was HOT! Incredible imagery. I'd love to see you continue this, even if it's only one more chapter to show what happens to Hojo when Kurama & co catch up with him. I'm sure the have a fitting punishment in mind. OK, heck with it. I'm going to BEG for another chapter, since I really want to see Hojo get what's coming to him. Pleeeeeeeease? I don't normally beg (in fact, I've never begged for an update) but I'll make an exception here.