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I must admit that I'm actually sad that this was a 1 shot. I'd love to read more and find out why it stated(in the summary or A.N., I think) that there was a reason she was supposed to meet them, It left me with the feeling that her meeting the 3 of them (& them being youkai) was intentional & could have meant that she'd end up involved with them further. I still enjoyed reading it but I'd love to see what Kurama & Hiel planned to do Hojo and I wished they'd of discovered that she were a miko or, at least, a 'spiritually aware' & powerful being, such as the other former or members of their team.

You should definitely continue this story you can make it even more awesome.... make sure Hojo gets his if you keep it going!

This is so good, I'd love to see you make this into a full length story.

Please add more

The ending was a good place if you were going to continue this. I hope that you do. I loved the story. If you decide to write more would you please email me at astrakage@yahoo.com when you post more?

I would love to read Hojo get his ass kick or killed for what he did to Kagome. Hojo is right but Houjo is feudal era's Hojo.

This story is great. I love the idea of making hojo a bastard and I hope that Hiei and fry him for that. Great one-shot. I was sorry to see it end there though I would have loved to read Hojo's death scene.

i always knew hojo was an asshole. please continue the story. you can't let it end there, i would like to know what happens to kagome, who she gets with although all of them would be good. and i would like to find out what happens when kurama, hiei, and yusuke get ahold of hojo. all three of them are viciously protective of what is theirs and well i think kagome is definitely theirs now. please make this into a two or three shot. or even better make a couple of chapters. please update soon.

i love this story :) you should add another chapter on to it because i want them to kill and torcher hobo i mean hojo :) so please add another chapter :)

Great story! I would love to see you add another chapter to conclude what happens to Kagome, Hojo (I wanna know what Kurama does to him), etc :)
Cheers!