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for Battle Cry

by Rebeldedm

person Sam
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is so sad. I LOVE IT! I love a good angst every once in a while :)
person joy
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
best ****in story ever please continue
person Sam
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THAT ASS.. is just plain stupid.. how could he not know what he has done??????? He knows that everytime he goes with kikyou that she hurts.. how do you think she is going to feel when he just leaves and never comes back.
person hannie
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story! Cant wait to read more.
person whorl
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay Inuyasha is the ass right now, but he can redeem himself if he really grovels, and hasn't had sex with Kikyo yet.... I really hope he didn't get it on with Kikyo cause if he did then there really is no forgivness for him, the two-timing lying ass!!!!!!
person Kagome18
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lol glad you liked it. Oh you'll love the ending i'm working on it but i know you'll love it. lol that all i can say.
person Danny Girl
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kagome you made me cry for her. I wonder how will Inuyasha fix this? I really like this story and can't wait till the next chapter.
person Haruka
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very Good!! I can't wait for Kagome to smile, because after that she deserves it :) Keep it up!
person Danny Girl
schedule August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please Please Please, update soon. I'm liking this story
person FuctupandGone
schedule August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow this is pretty good.

Jst thgou t you shoudl knw lol soryr i have like lead hands tonite lol nicely looked over, it was good before, but it's even better now
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I like...no love the darkness this is going in to