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for The Path of Forgiveness

by Kryssala

person Faerie Demoness
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting twist! I like it. Short, but sweet. Can't wait for the next chapter!

~Much Love~

Faerie Demoness
person Faerie Demoness
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is actually pretty good. I like it a lot, please continue. Remember, nothing has to be completely and totally accurate as far as history or weather is concerned. It's your story and you write as you please. I can't wait for an update! Good luck!
person raven28
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it grat keep it up
person Ceridwyn
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. But I'm almost getting the feeling of Blue Lagoon here, with the girl on the ship and everything, I dunno, maybe its just me. Its totally awesome though, I like it. Very well paced too. Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter.
person tajia
schedule August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hnnnnn! It appears your story will keep this Tajia looking forward to more chapters.
person saphirejade
schedule August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice start. I am looking forward to the next chapter!

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