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September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey. I really like your story... even though at first it seemed too tame for me and a little too much like Cinderella combined with one of those romance stories from Judith Mc.Naught. Anyway... when is the part where Sesshoumaru finds out he was really wrong in assuming Inuyasha let herself be taken by Naraku and is still a maiden?
Write soon
Write soon
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September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a little slow. Plus, Inuyasha is awfully stupid. Why wouldn't she at least consider that Sya is going off to see Naraku? And she's only been there 7 days, and suddenly she has all of these best friends?
Also, consumation was a big deal in royal marriages, it's hard to believe that they'd go this long without it.
And why is she napping all the time? She chops some veggies and takes and nap. Walk in the garden, take a nap.
Also, consumation was a big deal in royal marriages, it's hard to believe that they'd go this long without it.
And why is she napping all the time? She chops some veggies and takes and nap. Walk in the garden, take a nap.
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September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this continue! I dont know about the whole inuyasha being a girl but so far im liking it! XD
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September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are the best fuckin author I have ever read of I love your story I love it your great please continue thank you very much for writing this story I LOVE YOU lol.
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your story pleases me. You adapt romance and adventures and Inuyasha's characters, and I was waiting to find how Sesshomaru would react in front of a soon-to-be mate as beautiful as Princess Inuyasha. That's nice, and not all simple. Continue, and thank you !
A french reader,
Merely Truth
A french reader,
Merely Truth
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September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
#6: Well, it seems that Inuyasha has the hots for her irate mate, Lord Sesshoumaru. And said lord is hot for his hanyou too. Hmm, I wonder what's going to happen next.
Excellent work! Please update soon.
Nemesis ^_~
Excellent work! Please update soon.
Nemesis ^_~
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September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Keep going I think your the first author I atually admire other than xxsango22xx good job update soon and thanks for letting me have something good to read.
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September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. Though I thought Inu's revenge on Sya was sort of lame. Also, she says no one has been nice to her in Japan before Sango, but Mina and several others were.
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September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Enjoying the fic. but wouldn't Akemi have sent guards w/Inuyasha? and a well-armed ship? Nobles, especially princesses, traveled with lots of guards and treasures and things, like in Crouching Tiger, Hidden Dragon.
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September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good chapter. I enjoyed your description of the ceremony. Though I don't think that Sess or InuT will put up w/Sya for long.