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by KIKI441

person gen
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i've been reading your fic since you first loaded it into aff.
it is nice that you have their relationship very settled -
but i keep thinking that the next chapter will be the angs-filled one, the one with naraku wreaking havoc?

sometimes i would like it to be some other villain (i really hate naraku) but i guess it is convenient just to use him as the villain.

thank you for keeping on with your tale.
person nchsmi
schedule March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I had to reread this story! I can't believe how beautiful it is. It has so much heart and soul in it! My stupid little fic pales in comparison! I can't wait for chapter 18. I can't wait to read about their baby(ies?). Well Inu's father leave his new son with Inu for a little while? I mean it's a lot to cope with, losing a wife and almost losing a son too. I hope he has some happiness. I also hope that Naraku and that 'Sya' tramp gets what's coming to them. Even though Naraku is a good guy in my fic. He's such a bastard in this one, guard Inu well Sess!~ B reading U!
person ArchNemesis
schedule March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, Inuyasha did warn her stupid mother-in-law. Can't say that I feel sad because quite frankly, I don't.

Excellent work! Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!

Nemesis ^_~
person ShadowofLight
schedule March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh I am so glad the baby is alright, I was really scared for a second! Graceful scholar, yeah I like it :) And I'm glad that bitch is dead. Gotta love that sword of Sessy's. One witch down and another to go. Eee I'm so glad you updated though I know Naraku won't let them have an happy ending.
person c-loke
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Akemi's wife and her niece!!!!

How can he marry again? and to such a vile creature?

I don't have anythign against babies, but anything born out of that demon would be evil. I just can't see it happen. Please tell she really is going to die and the child with her.

Inuyasha should be the only child from her father's line. Not something connected to such a hateful demon.

lol

On a brighter note, I totally love this story

Can't wait to read more
person nchsmi
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just emailed you so I am leaving my review! I love this story! The relationship between Sess and Inu is one of the best I have read! It's on the same level as '50 years' by LadyIvy. Another exceptional writer! Keep up the AWESOME work! 'Til next chapter~ B reading U!
person Jessie
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!!!!! you can't leave it that way ..... you are soooooooo evil!!!!!! I love the story so far please write more soon
person lare
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Inuyasha is having his baby?? Yeah!!!
person TruthHurts
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I must say that your story is good but one problem.. Sesshoumaru is extremwly OCC. Usually it's okay but you are completely taking away his character and Inuyasha's as well. It just feels out of place reading it. Yes it's good but there are just some parts that are extremely corny for the characters. It's not a flame review I'll tell you that because it is a good piece of work. It just seems that you decided you don't like normal Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha. But that's just my oppinion. But yeah your personalities for your charaters just don't match. XP! lol. Well that's all i wanted to say.
person TruthHurts
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
((note:: I know you said that your characters would be ooc but it's just usually there is SOME likeness to the original characters. x.x.. so i do understand that their supposed to be OOC but it's just a shock at how OOC they are. get it? XD! i hate trying to explain things. v.v... lol. okay byes! lol))