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by SilenceoftheHeart

person *sleepy*
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know, I just kind of noticed that all the feminine bits of Sesshoumaru are in sharp contrast with "her" character and everything she wants to be. "Gentle curves" and "slender hips" and "soft breasts" just don't seem to fit someone who'd ruthlessly murder millions of demons/people for her personal desire for power. I guess it's sort of a side explanation of why she tries so hard to hide her gender, but I'm not sure if the womanly softness symbolizes a deeper nature that even Sesshoumaru is unaware about or whether environment has truly prevailed over heredity and her body is something she just can't entirely control. But then again, I might've forgotten something I've read so....yeah.

I don't know why I wrote that.
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aha! I've been waiting for this story to update. I swear that I have been following it. I just get really shy when it comes to reviewing ages after the last update. Any requests for a new update at that point always makes me feel like I am nagging the authoress. Or maybe it's just me that gets infernally pissed when somebody writes a review that says 'update pleez! u rok!' like two days before I have the next update ready or whatnot. Anyways...

Another great installation into a great story. I understand the distractedness that you felt for writing this one, its like going back to elementary school where the teachers keep saying "now class...you have to do your have tos before you do your want tos". But, I do understand how to write a fic in such a way that both you and your readers understand it. Sometimes unseen backstory is a necessary evil. Although it was nice that you gave our lovely lady some time to think about her brother...at least in a few moments...in a not so hateful light. Sesshomaru, regardless of how he/she is portrayed in the fandom, is (or should be) a very cerebral creature. Nothing but her own thoughts will move her down the path of change. Because of this, I am very anxious for you to show the relationship between Sess and Rin, which I imagine will come up relatively soon, with her entering in ep 35 and all.

As always, I will be waiting for the next portion...and in the meantime I shall go to your lj and become your friend. I really need to start up one of my own, so I shall use your invitation as a kick in my ass to actually keep my lj functional.

Until next time...
Russanya, the Vixen of Argentum
person big_show2000us
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Im not that in to yaoi pairings but when it comes to altered gender pairings the gloves come off and I must say this is one of the better ones. I can't wait to see what you do with this stroy when you continue.
person Shuori
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You updated! YEAH!
person sparkangel
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay, i finally had time read your fic and loved it as usual.
i was hoping sesshoumaru would keep her arm
well anyway, cant wait for the next chapter.
person DrakenD4
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWW! I feel so bad for Sesshoumaru -_- , anyway this was a wonderful chapter
can't wait for the next one.
person Tryst
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cackles! Ah yes. I've been reading this. Hehehehe, your doing a wonderful job and I've been so fuzzy lately on just reading, writing, posting... I forgot my reviews. Please forgive me. I'm very sorry bout that. Keep up the good work and know this, your one of my fav's with the fics. Hehehehe.

Anyway, thanks for the review on the challenge. I'm trying to get back in gear but it's taking me time. Challenges help. So, lets see where you take this and have some fun.

Tryst
person c-loke
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a interesting story. I have never thought of Sesshoumaru as a girl, but you made it work. I do find it a little strange that Inuyasha would be shorter than her, but that can't be help though(it's how it shows in the series). I can understand the strength, she is older, but I hope that Inuyasha becomes stronger later. The idea of Sesshoumaru accepting Inuyasha as his equal seems more realistic than otherwise. From what I have read so far, Inuyasha has still a long way to go before Sesshoumaru will accept him. I can't wait to see more...read more. I hope to read more soon.
person Manda
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great new chapter. Naughty Inu, bad time to be getting the hots on for your sis/bro XD
person SP777
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have to say this is DEFINITELY a good example of 'going in a different direction' and I applaud an author's effort to going beyond the norm...and your story that fills in the blank in the Inuyasha anime is a breath of fresh air here. It's rare I see these in fanfiction...

Even though this is not my speed, it DOES hold your interest. Keep going.