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August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
FUCKING CLIFFHANGER, u are mean as hell. U need to update this ASAP.
Peace & Love BastardOmega
Peace & Love BastardOmega
schedule
August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I cant wait to read more!!! This is so intense and its just the prologue!
schedule
August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was by far the sickest prologue i hav ever read. From the beginning of the chapter i was intrigued...who was this and what had happened. There is only one thing. The whole part before Inuyasha smells his love's blood, it wasnt written as good as the rest of the story. It didnt give me that connection to what Kagome was feeling and didnt allow much of a suspense towards what she was going to do. I'm not saying make that part longer, just make it more angust-filled.
I like the idea of "i cant believe it has come to this" or something similar, it just needed to be incorporated better. i think just the way you type the story can effect the quality; just like the way you pronounce certain words can affect your audience.
But overall, i absolutely believe this story is going to be great. The prologue is already captivating!
~$~$~L. Ca$h
I like the idea of "i cant believe it has come to this" or something similar, it just needed to be incorporated better. i think just the way you type the story can effect the quality; just like the way you pronounce certain words can affect your audience.
But overall, i absolutely believe this story is going to be great. The prologue is already captivating!
~$~$~L. Ca$h