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Do you have a beta? I love the story premise, and the writing it's self is fairly sound. But if you want help with baisic typos, gramar, spelling and an overall plot check, you should have someone beta read chapters for you before you post them. I have done Beta work before, and can probably recomend some other beta's if you want. Very nicely done and I look forward to more.

this could be more spaced out. it gives me a headach look at it. but i do want to read it. it looks really good.

Wow...really different start. I hope that Inuyasha doesn't go quietly. I like mate fics where things don't go too smoothly.

you have my attention now! continue on! great job love the idea of sessh's mom getting them together! ahaha! great! update now!

i reallly lik where this is going!! =3 i would luv seeing more of ur story in the near future!! hope u continue because i luv ur plot!! very original!! =3

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