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person Neptunee
schedule April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
now this is a story that i can sink my teeth in to. very original. hope you update soon.
person TheSoulmater
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOAH! Loved it! Another unique and ingenious plot beginning to emerge there. I hope to see another chappie soon!
person DocBevCulver
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooo, this looks like it could be promising. I hope that you continue it. I would love to see how the rest unfolds. :D

Bravo!
person Youka
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, leaves much to the imagination at the end. Hope you get to update it soon.
person Laini
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hm,interesting.Can't wait to see where u take this one lol.Update soon. ^_^

P.S.
Cant wait for an update to IUD too LOL ;) WHOOT!
person bluemoon_175
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have read alot of your other stories and they were fantastic and I know this one will be to, so please you must write more. This story is keeping me on my toes, I hope you keep up the job well done. I'm bouncen off the walls to see what happens next, so PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE ASAP.
person Kogasangel
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn.....I knew that I said that I would review last night, but sleep hit me hard and I had to go night-night. I love it, love it, love it. Do you realize that I love it? LOL I can already tell that this is going to be a wonderful story and am excited to see the next chapter....hint, hint.
person raven28
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
its good keep it up