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This...was nothing like I'd thought it would be like. That's not a bad thing, let me set that straight right away, but it certainly was surprising. It really was open-ended though, and it wouldn't hurt to add another chapter. I know how hard that can be sometimes, so don't feel obligated.

I always try to see if the people who have reviewed my stories have stories of their own, and I was pleasantly surprised to see that you had so many. I don't think I'll review them all though, sorry. I'm not good with crossovers. Moreover, about the beta thing, if you need help, as I too noticed the mistakes throughout, but I'm not condemning or anything, I always edit the stuff I post after I post it, I would be happy to help you. I know enough about the Inuyasha universe, though I'll admit I haven't read all the manga like I want to. Only a matter of time though, so soon enough I'll be able to give you completely knowledgeable responses should you need them.

My e-mail is in my profile so if you want to respond than feel free, in fact I'd be happy to hear from you. On one final note, I'd like to thank you for your kind reviews. I know personally that reviews help motivation, so that's why I take the time to read stories if I find any from those who have taken the time to review mine. Thank you and keep trying!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapter?

It just accured to me that if you ever think of doing something with this beyond what you've already done, my suggestion would be to do the whole Sesshomaru's take on her leaving and/or what happens on the other side of the well, if he'll wait that long to find her or something.
But thats just my suggestion, don't go doing a continuation just becfause people cry for it, it just has to come to you, you know?
Funny thing is I had an idea quite similar to this floating through my mind for age's and reading this (for the umpteength time, its just that good) makes me want to write it all that much more.

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I could see Sesshomaru doing that actualy. Your characterizations were good, I liked how you portrayed them but you got a little confusing with all the time shifts (but just a little) but not too much too the point where it would have been impossible to follow. Good job, I liked it, very sappy with out being overly melo-dramatic. Nice :)

More please! This is very interesting.

I swear I'm almost to the point of tears. That was very well written.

That was absolutely marvelous. I'm torn between wanting it to continue and just cutting it off as an excellent one shot. If inspiration hits, by all means continue, but not just for the sake of continuing.

... get rid of the `````'s. it makes the um, story scroll different... example and point...


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Don't make it a one-shot you should really continue. Update Soon