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person madmiko
schedule January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
SO good!! Loved it! You write so beautifully and really make Sesshoumaru a hero to root for. His thoughts and emotions are poetic, but not sappy. "... she made him feel everything. She made him feel." Gave me chills. I love it that he met up with her at the park, through those dogs of hers. Their breakfast date should be very interesting. And, of course, I am still dying for the moment when she sees herself in the museum. Here's the question: will Inuyasha be breaking her heart before then? Right there, even? Because I still have to say, it seems like he's sneaking around on her. I just can't wait to see how the relationships unfold. This is good stuff! More, please!
person cocoke5
schedule January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very good and i like the story and i feel that inyuasha see other woman and not telling kegoma about it. i think that the story is real good and can not wait for up date on the story. up date soon/
person madmiko
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a great story! Just loving it! It's very well-written. Can't wait to see if something is up with Inuyasha -- love the way you're including so many familiar names! Kagome's old boyfriends -- too good! I hope you add more to this soon!!
person silveryoukia
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great job!!! Plz update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next
person Jamie
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dang!! what happended, you were doing so well then @poof@ nothing! Because of halloween and having to move offesses, I still had to wait almost a week before I could get on the computer and see what I have missed? But I see I have missed nothing! Don't worry I still love you, and I hope to see from you soon. I know some where deep inside you'll find something to write, after all every writer haves it and knows it. That means you will too! GOOD LUCK and Happy Hunting;)
person Elisa
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this fic. I was so upset when I went to click on the next chapter and nothing was there...I'm still in denial thinking that I just over looked the button...oh well, I can not wait to read more, as a fan of art myself, this fic really appeals to me. Wonderful job! Update soon! ^_~
person jamie
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YES I watched V for Vendeta, and it was awsome! As for the story being written about Sesshomaru being Vendeta, well just as long as he's not burnt from head to toe! I would realy hate to see his beauitful face runt because of that miss hap in the explostion of the lab. And as for your story! I my self absolutely love art, skeches, pencil work, and oil pastels(That's my fav!) As a metter of fact I'm a studant of Art Intructions Shcools they averties on TV. I have been schooling for about a half-year now and I can't tell you how much I love it. And I most cerintly can't tell you how much i love this story you wrote! Very nice! Though I must say I never read on of these on AFF with Naraku & Kagura together before! But still you did wondiful, Keep it up and good luck! Up date soon I'm looking forward to reading more!
person Megan Consoer
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person DA
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*drool* I loved your story. Please, please, please contiune with this!
person Faerie Demoness
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was great! And yeah, I've seen "V for Vendetta" I wish they could have had her remove his mask and his face be all normal or something like that. It was an alright movie, albeit a little confusing. Wow, I just heard on the news that Whitney is divorcing Bobby Brown. About damn time. Anyway, this was great. I can't wait to see what's going to happen when they all meet. Its gonna be good. Take care!

~Much Love~

Faerie Demoness