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for Moyuhi Mt.

by lonely0001

person BastardOmega
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is starting to get VERY interesting i hope u update soon a'l be looking forwar to it.

Peace & Love BastardOmega
person Anon
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you really suck...and it's really sad...

hmm..

get a clue and maybe you will get a few more GOOD reviews.
schedule August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm probably horny but... uh... I need to read a hentai ecchi scene...

care to write one?

yeah...
that would be hot.

between kags and inu

i dont trust this bitch.
^_^

btw... back to my writing skills and out of my hentai thoughts...

You shouldnt be afraid to use spacing and such, it is relevant to
the format of the reading will definitely improve dramatically if you
do so, as well as checking your grammical usage and spelling, I am a shitty
speller as well, lmao... that's what makes spell check fucking...
amazing! but use it okay? lmao

I'll look forward to reading more.
I simply adore the concept that you incorporated within the context of...
his mother revelant to his human night. that was simply adorable.

keep it up and heed my suggestions.