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by Lexbubble

person Dante
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, pretty good story for your first yaoi. One question, why did Miroku say that Inu wouldnt have to worry about having that "problem" again. I don't understand. But otherwise, I thought you did a great job.

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person Iyasu
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It wasn't a dream Inuyasha... nice work for your first lemon, I loved it.
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY! My first review. I actually got a review quicker for this oneshot than my story that is still a WIP. I am actually out of my element writing Yaoi stories so for u to leave a good review is an honor. It isn't actually my first lemon though more like my first Yaoi lemon and story. And u can thank Sexy Inu for asking me to write it. It was fun.

Lexi AKA Bubble-chan