rate_review Reviews

I gotta find out what happens next. Great job with this story.

*girly squeal* Weeeee!! New chap... LOVED it. Kouga & Sesshy together, oh WOW! That's all I can say. Finally! Dying to see what happens next. Impenetrable fortress? Bullshit! Ha! They haven't build walls to keep out a pissed taiyoukai. Let alone TWO! Woo-Hoo!! Yay Kouga! Kill all those fuckers while Sesshomaru finds his miko. Awesome job, Rin. WOO-HOO!!

you wouldn't believe how excited i was to see that you have updated!

*\O/* dances Rinseternalsoul happy dance!! *\O/*

i loved your portrayal of kouga and his tirade at the battered sesshomaru, i found it quite funny >=D

congratulations on your awards, the recognition is well deserved.

thank you,
ginny

I loved this story. I like how you always keep the us guess whats next. I cant wait for the update.

NO NO NO NO NO NO NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! THIS is why I can't read your fiction UNTIL it's finished!!!!!!!!!! ARGH!!!!!!! I hate when you do cliffies, hell all of your chappies are cliffies!!!!!!!!!!!!!ARGH!!!!!!!!!!!!! GOD DAMN!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS PIECE BUT I HATE THE WAITING!! I wouldn't dare to ask you to hurry thats the worse thing anyone can do to an artist (and thats what you are) but if a bout of inspiration reaches you don't ignore it PLEASE!!!!! Poor sesshy just can't stay like that on the floor with that stupid dude hovering over him. :)

i just found this story and it is an exceptional piece of art, eloquently written. your use of language is amazing. it is an intelligent and exciting adventure that i haven't wanted to walk away from until i fell off that last cliff. now i'm hanging with the faith that since you have consistantly and frequently updated this story; i won't have too long to wait and that fact is reassuring.

thank you,
ginny

woo hoo! My only complaint is that I found this story for the first time only to end on this cliffhanger. Oh, the agony!
Otherwise:
1. I am so happy with the portrayal of Kagome's feelings for Inuyasha. I love the Kag/sessh pairing but I hate when Kagome is just suddenly NOT in love with Inu anymore. It just seems to make her character shallow, just wiping all her devotion under the rug. I really appreciate the fact that Kagome stays the same, strong, compassionate, devoted character she is, but still explores this relationship.
2. The pace of the relationship flows so nicely, and I swear every time I read Sesshoumaru's thoughts I about die laughing. Even his curses are in character, heh. He's just too cool for words.
3. The detective is a great character. Almost right off, I was looking forward to reading sections about him just as much as about the characters I knew from canon. Can't wait to see what he finds out. Same with Raishou.
4. Oh yeah, hate the bad guys. Interesting premise, too.
5. Oh, I was so happy to see Kouga thrown into the mix. fun, fun, fun. Kanna....still creepy as hell.

thanks for writing such an excellent story!

Great to see you back hun. This chapter was great! I love this story. Keep it up!

Hey! Who took us off of the directory for the HentaiHarlets. Now Death is angry. Grrrr. You wont like Death when she is mad. LOL I have the link to it, if you want it Rin, I will email it to you when I get home tonight after class. it will be like around 10:30, but you will get it. I am at work right now, so I cant do it.

Hey Death! Long time no hear from. I've missed you girl. I'm anxiously awaiting your next brilliant addition to The House of Lemons. A Halloween special is calling your pen-name! As for our link... it is still there. I looked. I think that our reader was looking for 'Hentai Harlots', when the pen-name is actually TheHentaiHarlots. I'm glad they are still looking for us though. Our fan dedication makes me soooo happy! LOL!