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by Rinseternalsoul

schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG AWSOME FIC! comando trigger happy sesshoumaru is so hot! yay for kagome but I'm kinda disappointed that I didn't get to see her kick ass, besides the purification overload thing. anyway it was great. O,O I nearly fell out my chair when I read the part about sesshy-chan having markings down there...... (nosebleed) I was like " OH....well...um...well..damn!". Can't wait to see what happends next! please update soon. (Hachi is fluffy chibi cute! ^_^)

Ja ne!

person Merely Truth
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I wasn’t able to seek AF while I was at the hospital, and, of course, the computer was unavailable just after my return. Sooooo, it was very long and, what did I see on my screen ??? A new story from Rinseternalsoul !!!!!!!
Yeeeehhheeeeeehhhhhhhhhh !!!!!! Oh my god, oh my god…!!!

I am truly very glad because you’re a wonderful Inuyasha’s fanfictions’ author, believe me (but you have to know, with all the reviews you got, no ????). Now I have to find a little corner with a lot of time free of children and phone and husband, and I will be able to appreciate the new story (didn’t read a chapter yet). Why the review, then ? Just to THANK YOU. After reading will I send my critics (he he he……).

A bientôt !
Your faithful french reader,

Merely Truth
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I loved it. Every gorey, suspenceful and violent bit.
person szaugglaughs
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How awesome. I forgot to check on the story for a while, and what a great few chapters I'd missed! I thought the scenese with Kouga and Sessh meeting were hysterical. Rishou and that acid eating through the apartments was a great bit of humor. Good fighting scenes, I really thought you did a great job of focusing on particular moments in the fight while still giving bits and pieces here and there that hinted at the rest of the chaos going on during the battle. It worked well, for me, to make a nice image in my head that was very clear. Poor Kouga, always gets the shaft, eh? And Kagome's serious ass-kicking was great. The only thing I was a little disapointed in, solely due to my own personal vengeful nature, was that I was hoping for Sir Supreme Bastard to suffer more, since he'd caused so much suffering for his psycho dreams of world conquest. I know he lost his dream, and that had to have been the worst thing ever for him, but the revelation of that, and how he dealt with it, went by so fast that my satisfaciton that he 'paid' wasn't as great.

But again, that's what I was looking for, that doesn't mean it was the best thing for the story. Just mentioning it in case that was something you were aiming for too.;-) I very much look forward to the next chapter, and I am really, really hoping we get to see a detective / Sessh meeting...'cause you are darn good at those confrontation scenese of that type. I also really hope the detective and Mrs. Higurashi get it together before the end!

A very enjoyable story!
person LotisFlower
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow!!! i loved it!!! no wonder it got 2nd place for action/adventure!! but in my opinion it should have been 1st!!! ^.^
person cocoke5
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well first . com on a new nephew i bet he is cute . i love babys. and i want to tell you that the story is great and i love the part where kanna take the bitch soul in the mirror. i can not wait for the lemmon. and i have been reading the other storys that you have writing . so up date soon and tell me about your new nephew . and i will bw here wait for more storys from you rinseternalsoul. good luck with you new nephew.
person swtdrm01
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved the new chapter. It was fantastic! I can't wait to read the next chapter and the finale ^-^. Please update soon. And please update your new story.
person Convict_Panthress
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Congrats to you!!!! WOOT!!!! Welcome to the world of Aunt-dom. Great story by the way. Let me know when you update. And seriously congrats! I hope your successful on the ultimate mission of every Aunt: to spoil!!! ^.~ XD
person Convict_Panthress
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Congrats to you!!!! WOOT!!!! Welcome to the world of Aunt-dom. Great story by the way. Let me know when you update. And seriously congrats! I hope you're successful on the ultimate mission of every Aunt: to spoil!!! ^.~ XD
person amhor56
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was an excellent battle scene. I loved the way you described the part where she got her arm cut off! That was so cool! And for a minute there you had me going and I was just about to cry. I thought that Kagome really died and Sesshoumaru was too late! But it all turned out good. Also, I was surprised with Kanna being there. It was a very good move on Sesshoumaru and Kouga's part to bring her. Very clever. Well I can't wait for the lemon. I bet it's gonna be very passionate! Update soon.