Hello first off I don't normally review fanficts but your story is complex, deep. Just great. I want to offer my help. Take over until you come back. I am stuck in bed, I'm very sick and having infusions the meds are hardcore so my immunity is compromised so I have to rest and stay home. So if you want I can ghost write for you. Please contact me.
Wow. I'm not sure how this is going to end now. Normally I am a huge fan of Sesshomaru getting Kagome in the end, but this time I'm siding with Koga, Inuyasha and everyone else. A month with no word is stretching it, but over a YEAR?!? By then most people would be holding candle light vigils for their safe return... and to think how his parents must have felt!
I honestly cannot think of an adequate excuse for such a long absence with no word... except for kidnapping and amnesia- maybe alien abduction?
Anyway, I hope you continue this soon. It's so fun to read about Koga and his kick ass ride, Rin becoming a female version of Inuyasha (personality wise), and the rest of the crew being so... well... goofy. I love these guys and I wish I had a crew like that! Endless entertainment.
Krimson Kitsune
PS- I hope Kagome punches Sesshomaru in the friggin mouth soon for running out on her. The counsel should take his title from him. When you run out on your obligations and promises for that long without word, you lose the trust of the people you rule over.
MontiK
good job and update soon