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for When Everything Falls Apart

by IrishBlackRosie

person C'Asia
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please upate soon i will like to know what
will happen next
person kinkyneko33
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this last chapter gave met he chills. this is such a great story! update soon!!
person Tora Mizuki Sea
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
u bitch u made me cry........waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh...............thats so sad.........ur so mean.......................


great story
person wudelfin
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very well done, you should continue.
person lala_land
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was so sweet keep it up
person Semme
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I cried three f-ing times! THREE! This is the only story that made me cry three times. When Rin died, at Rin's funeral, and I don't know the other one. I don't like being able to put myself in the characters emotional state. It happens a lot. So I stick to the more happier stories.
person animeprincess1
schedule October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WENCH! T_T T_T You made me cry. T_T T_T
person Ashley Wilson
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Keep up the good work! Can't wait till the next update!
person Anon
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
not bad i guess wo am i kidding that was soo good
person Vague
schedule September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you were going so good i understand why you wrote it but did you really really have to make her die? I can read anything, you can write the most perverse things, i can witness said perversions without blinking but i cannot STAND the suffwring of a child i cant stop crying because another little child has lost her life (your neice) youve written a beautiful stoty and now ill sleep as i wont be able to stay awake. I'm very sorry about your little laina.

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