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for Erased In a Moment

by ryukotsusei

person Megan Consoer
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Haywire_Hakaze (it won't let me log in. hmmm...)
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So we get to see a little bit of interest from Hiei now. Yayzors. I'm glad that you're staying in character-- well, as far as I'm concerned. Kagome's no weakling, and definitely wouldn't back down in a situation like that. Kudos. ^_^
person Lucridlucifel
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Second time around reading and I still love it. Hiei/Kagome is my second favorite pairing.
person Haywire_Hakaze
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like how it's turning out, so far. (You're right; there are a few typos but they aren't too ghastly. ^_^ )

I love the Hiei/Kagome pairing-- hell, ANY Kagome pairing rocks my socks-- but I like this new spin on things. I don't think I've heard of any similar storyline. KUDOS!
person Megan Consoer
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?