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for Whose Child is This?

by BlueRibbon98

person mel
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! A new chapter, and a very good one too. Keep up the good work, and update often!
person Tallon
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey, i love this story also i hope that you do not stay on one time line forever many writers doing these kind of storys stay on one time line. i hope that Kagome grows up in this story and ever chapter has a time in her life.hope this will help u out plese dont take this in a worng way. Tallon
person AIdeen
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it!!!! Please up-date soon!!! I love this story so far!!!!! Continue please!!!!!
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wicked cool! I wondered how Sesshomaru would explain this to her. Like an adult, smart. I can hardly wait fo rthe next chapter. Could you email me when you update again? phoenix_wolf502@yahoo.ca Thanks, and keep up the great writing.
person raven28
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yes yes please dont stop i rilly like it keep going please
person midnighttimberwolf
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story..... I loved it though I wish there were more chapters to read I believe this will be a great fic.... Keep up the good work and update soon.
person nhjade1
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it already. In it you said that they age much slower I can't wait to see what you do to work that into the story. She is much like rin in this story but who doesn't love rin right. I can't wait to see how she handles the news so update soon.
person Shard
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
An interesting and very original story. I hope to read more and see how it progresses.
person bluemoon_175
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh please you must write more I love this story, it sounds so fantastic I can't wait to you update. So PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE ASAP.
person goku chbi fujo
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
onegai don't stop. need more

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