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August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhhh this is so sweeeeet.i love it keep it up please.
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August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"She had been still stiff and sore and hour ago and yet now here she was taking part in my annual surprise party that my father threw. It hit me then that it was only the day before that I claimed Kagome as my mate."
i had to read this whole paragraph multiple times... the reason being, as i read through this whole chapter, it seemed as though time skipped a little. as though maybe a week or two had passed..especially with how you had wrote previously that the guards and secretaries and what not learned to really like little kagome, and her being in the office with him on numerous occasions. i'm really hoping i was mistaken, because at first it sounded like sesshy had CLAIMED lil kags as his mate, as in the actualy MATING... but then it jumped to him picking up her things at her home so i'm assuming that kagome had only been in his care for one or two days right???
especially the part with, she was stiff and sore just an hour ago... i claimed her as my mate. it just sounded really bad. when i first read it, i thought that sessh had MATED as in sexually with a 4 year old girl... please tlel me i'm wrong...
i have enjoyed it so far, and i do hope you skip ahead in time to when kagome is like say... 15 or 16, i still think that like 13,14, is too young, but 15 16 would be a decent age, anyways, that's my rambling...
i had to read this whole paragraph multiple times... the reason being, as i read through this whole chapter, it seemed as though time skipped a little. as though maybe a week or two had passed..especially with how you had wrote previously that the guards and secretaries and what not learned to really like little kagome, and her being in the office with him on numerous occasions. i'm really hoping i was mistaken, because at first it sounded like sesshy had CLAIMED lil kags as his mate, as in the actualy MATING... but then it jumped to him picking up her things at her home so i'm assuming that kagome had only been in his care for one or two days right???
especially the part with, she was stiff and sore just an hour ago... i claimed her as my mate. it just sounded really bad. when i first read it, i thought that sessh had MATED as in sexually with a 4 year old girl... please tlel me i'm wrong...
i have enjoyed it so far, and i do hope you skip ahead in time to when kagome is like say... 15 or 16, i still think that like 13,14, is too young, but 15 16 would be a decent age, anyways, that's my rambling...
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August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is fantastic by far this is the most orginal story I've read in a long time. I give you thumbs up for doing so well..... Update soon.
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August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, at least they are getting to know each other. I have this funny feeling that Kagome was thinking about something else just before she told Sesshomaru about her nightmare. I can hardly wait for the next chapter! This is a very interesting story! Keep up the great work.
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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like, I like. Keep up the good work!
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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY! you wrote more it was really good sooo when's the next chapter coming out..... looking foward to it!
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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it, it's soooooo good, you have to continue
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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to read more so I hope you update soon. This is a fantastic story, keep up the good work. So PLEASE UPDATE ASAP. :^)
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August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!! Please continue it!!! I have to know what happens next!!!! PLease!!!!!!!!!!!
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August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
your story is really good and i hope you write more i would very much enjoy it! ^_^