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for When You Were Mine

by ACFH

person animefreaktierra
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really love this story it's really good i would love to here a lot more of it very soon you know you should put more sexy parts in it..........you know...lol
person Sam
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Its rediculous how much I like this story. Its just Kagome was HURT really bad and I dont see how she can sit there and be ok with Inuyasha who didnt trust her AT ALL. How can she put herself in that position its just going to hurt her every time she sees them together. even though she knows about kinky-ho it still seems like she would try to distance herself from letting him get to know her again at least for a little bit.. because of what he did.
person kagome
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow i love storys like this that the former lovers still have feelings for eachother i love it ^^ i hope you can up date i wont be here iam leveing in two days an i need to no wut inuyasha thought when kagome told him she loved him so up date ssoon plz graet sorry
person MariaFerGC
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank God you updated!! You should update faster. I like this is turning Inu/Kag, I love this chapter, keep updating more often and I will review more!
person guardian_celest
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it. I can't wait till Inuyasha finds out about that bitch kinky-hoe. It's really good. I'll be checking up for more. Good job!
person MariaFerGC
schedule August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How about UPDATING?????!!!!!!!!! I also hope it is Inu/Kag. How could inuyasha trusted kinky-poo in that!! Por kags. The clay pot telled inuyasha that kags was cheating on him, he belived it and go to bed with the cliff-faller, when kaggy enter in the room, Inu didnt realized he was also cheating on her so he couldnt made a escuse for her *cheating* on him UPDATE
person kagome
schedule August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG it was so good i cryed my eyes out, that fucking bitch kikyo a hate her so much she always interfears with inuyasha and kagome. they belong together. it was graet plz plz plz up date soon an i mean soon i an leveing in four days an i hope to see the up date before i leve
person Flippy
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
how could you end it just there?! you must update sooo. por favor!!!!!!! Please no pressure!!!
person Jared Hutchison
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the story so far, I like the way you make the characters express their feelings. I hope that you end up with Kagome and Inuyasha back together while giving that bitch, Kikyo, what she deserves. I really don't like Kikyo. The story is intense so far; I wasn't expecting that Kagome would end up as Inuyasha's maid and his friend especially after that spat they had on the night Kagome got screwed over by Kikyo. Keep up the good work and I hope you can come up with even more stories.
person Golden
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What an asshole Inuyasha was!!! Hopefully Kagome gets a boyfriend to make him jealous :) :)