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for When You Were Mine

by ACFH

person Kiara
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Looking forward to the next chapter.
person Pup1dasn
schedule September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good job
PLEASE GET THE NEXT CHAPTER OUT SOON
person MariaFerGC
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please Update, I cant stand it.
person IYLuv
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Are you shittin' me!!! This story is just too good to be true. Oh My Lord!! Why would Inuyasha fall for something so ignorant like that? That was beyond stupid fdor what he did. I'm not callin you or the story stupid, just the way Inuyasha acted. but the story is too good for any reader!! Update soon!!!!!!
person Tristen
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow more I need to read more. I like it a lot.
person InuDestinyGirl
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update please and fast i like the story !!
person animefreaktierra
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really hope you get the next chapters out soon i can't wait anyway i love your story...keep up the good work!








person Soff
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Alright.. 45 clesius degrees of fever? That means dead. For a human. Seriously. 42 is the highest it can get and when it's that high, the person is unconscious. But anyhoo, nice start I guess.
person kakashilover
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww..... It was cute. I liked it. Can you write more soon?
person Coconut
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Id suggest shooting to make the chapters a bit longer, but overall, The story is going along rather well, keep up the good work!