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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i'm really sorry but you need to seriously fix this story...you can't really tell who is saying what and the other thing is its too short and honestly i didn't really like it, but keep trying
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August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice story
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August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hmm.. you really need to go back to school and learn how to write...
i dont know you could have a good plot but the lack of spelling skills as well as your lack of spacing and grammar skills really hides that... you are missing words, you spell shit wrong, you are not clear at all, and well there is just way too much to note in a comment, how old are you? you do realize that you have to be 18 or older to be on here right? hm.. cuz it seems that you are a lot younger...
oh and just a little FYI... inuyasha has cried for Kagome before.
yeah...
i'm done..
i dont know you could have a good plot but the lack of spelling skills as well as your lack of spacing and grammar skills really hides that... you are missing words, you spell shit wrong, you are not clear at all, and well there is just way too much to note in a comment, how old are you? you do realize that you have to be 18 or older to be on here right? hm.. cuz it seems that you are a lot younger...
oh and just a little FYI... inuyasha has cried for Kagome before.
yeah...
i'm done..