AFF Fiction Portal
schedule February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't say that I liked it. Everyone was so out of character that it was hard to believe or picture. It was more like you made your own original personalities and then used the Inuyasha names. I think your talents would be better appreciated writing original work, not fanfiction.
person Lissa
schedule August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You have got to put out chapter two. I really wanna know what happens next. Great imagination.
person Tristen
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GREAT Chapter! Keep goin Kagome is goin to walk all over Kiky-ho I tell you that much! PLEASE UPDATE
person kagome1312
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok so far its really good keep the work up and plz update soon!!!!!!!!!!
person BastardOmega
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well as i say on most storys keep it up and update soon u her.

Peace & Love BastardOmega
person Little Jack 2
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was awsome how Inuyasha was saying to everyone not to mess with him or he'll be fucking them up.Keep it up I also loved how you turned Kikyo into a slutty whore.Update soon.