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for Dear brother

by GrayWolf

person seto'swifey
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
If Sesshy does indeed get preggy, can he have at least one girl? All the other Mpreg fics have boys, and I just think it would be cute to have one little girl.
person Maria
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey
This is an amazing fic and I can't wait until the next chapter! I hope that Sesshomaru will be okay, I know that Inuyasha will heal with time but perhaps Kagome will have to take Sesshomaru to her time in order to fix him from the mesma? I don't know what other sugestions I can give you because your fic is so awsome! Anyways I must be going now, my Mom is being a b**ch... Ja ne^^
person cm34
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
its too bad you couldnt make up your mind whether or not they should be together or not
person death angel
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story ie sooooooooo goood. What is going to happen to Sesshoumaru you can't let him die. Update soon. Can't wait to find out what happens next
person nette
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i'm glad to see you have uodated and i enjoyed reading this chapter, poor inu and sesshy i hope they both survive this little bump in the relationship. update soon.
person Zetunia
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love love LOVE this! please update ;o;
person angel
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was gerat ... i hope a healer come soon .. please please dont let sess die ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
person seto'swifey
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
He has pups? but they didnt do anything yet. Anyway, it was short but good.
person Arashi
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well I have to say you got me hooked.
I love how Sesshoumeru nearly lost(practically did) it when he found Inuyasha and saved him.
Now and again they seem a little OOC, but thats normal, they prolly don't feel much like themselves either..
After all they are going through something neighter were prep'ed for.
Very impressed, and please continue! I'm waiting along with many others for you update!

Thanks So much for your time!

Arashi
P.S. I wish I could write as well as you can!
person Merely Truth
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello ! Yes, I enjoyed this story : you have good ideas ! A mean Kagome, that's always interesting, a change in the relationship between the brothers also, but I find Sesshomaru perhaps a little out of character. In some reactions, words, he isn't himself. Continue nevertheless, but, please, try to avoid mistakes : they put a shadow on my pleasure...
I wait to see how they'll be doing during the time needed by Inuyasha to recover (^-°).

A french reader,
bons baisers de France,

Merely Truth