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for Dear brother

by GrayWolf

person Dragon7
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
schedule March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yayayaya and yay XD. u finally updated. i was hoping to see this one up soon and i must say i'm not disappointed one bit. in fact i LUVD IT! oh man an out of control inuyasha is not good man, especially since he thinks his brother is dead. yea not good. i hope they settle him down soon so he can revive his brother. u gotta update soon, the suspense is killin me. no literally its killin me
schedule March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
man ... i hope that works .. please update soon .. later for now

angel
person dyami
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's a really good story but, a bit dragged out over a year. I kinda lost interest in checking for updates.
person Starfall
schedule January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love the story so far can't wait to see new chapters =)
person Polka Dot
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Here's an opportunity for total gore, I say go for it!
person angel
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
man ... i hope thye can get them all out and that he will be ok ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
person gen
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmmm. another cliffy. i'm just thinking sess isnt going to die.
otherwise, the story wont be resolved.

this chappie reminds me of a house eppy, not in particulars but in the general tone.

i need to re-read the entire fic (although i remember parts of it well)
because i dont remember why sess has this about-face....
that is, why he suddenly wants inu
and then of course, how sess got infested in the first place...
i seem to remember a dog disease that sounds like this
i wonder why kouga's in the picture...
setting up for something? although kouga's been a useful foil in a lot of stories

i hope you explain them sometime in your romance cum mystery story.
and i hope you keep on writing
person Vampress
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story, lots of supense & action. BUT Hate the cliffies!
person Lord of the West
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey you ^_^
I think your fanfiction of Inuyasha is really really great *give you a golden Globe for the best fanfic I've ever read* one question: Will Inu fall in Love with his older brother when they meet each other? Please write to my e-mail ^^ please tell me when you have uploaded a new chap of this Story!

yours Lord of the West