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for Dear brother

by GrayWolf

person sma_orlando
schedule December 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please finish this great story.
person Dela1
schedule June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG you cant have him die

I love your story it is getting really good

Thanks
person dela1
schedule June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh come on You cnt leave it like this plz update sooon
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok, i would really like the next chapter where everything ends up happy.
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...i'm sorry...but ur a bitch...i loved this story it was amazing...and it was like a historic event....it was just simply amazing...and then u killed Inuyasha...that's not right...i still luv u and ur stories...but i hated the ending to this one...but u can still redeam it....pls fix it and make Inuyasha happy...he has enough bullshit in his life as it is...or you could give it to me and i will fix it...i don't care...as long as it is fixed somehow.

~Gaarakiksass~

person krad
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY!FINALLY A NEW CHAP!And let me start by saying...OMG!HOW CAN THIS BE HAPPENNG,ITS NOT FAIR!T-T First Sess dosen't come back to life,making Inuyasha heart broken and if that wasn't enough HE's about to die!But more over this was an AWESOME chap,well worth the wait.^____^The feeling were so strong that I did cry.I hope things start to turn for the better.PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!
person Jan
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Poor InuYasha, I can't believe that you had him first suffer the death of his brother to then use Sesshomaru's body to rape poor InuYasha, and to top it off he was a freaking virgin!!! Why couldn't you have Sessho and Inu pair first before all this going on??? That way it would have been his beloved brother to deflower him and not Naraku(it is him right?).

Please update chapter 15 soon, I am loving this fic. ^_^
schedule December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
why it has to be so sad? update soooooon!!!!
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now that everybodys dead, is this the end of the story???
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
not fair at all. next one better be good