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Great Story!!! Can't wait for the update!!! You write very well!!!

more please. And can you have kagome and inuyasha kiss properly?

love ur story keep up the good work!

Hey! I've been reading your story and it's very interesting. I like the concept you have going, and I'm glad to see you've updated, because i've been keeping up with your story. But I do have one criticism (just on the latest chapter) that you may want to fix. Sesshomaru's age. If he was three when Inuyasha's mom was all ready pregnant, how was he 15 when Inuyasha was 10? It just threw me off as I was reading, and it took my focus off of the story (which is pretty good). You just might want to fix the age thing.

Keep up the good work. I look forward to your next update.

butterflysuki

I just finished reading all ten chapters in one sitting. Excellent work. The characters just seen to flow. I usualled don't like fics that take place in the modern eara, this one is the exception......
Can't wait to read more... Thanks for sharing your story....

wow, he better fucking redeem himself.

I hope that this truly IS kag inu. and not inu kik.

that would suck and i would stop reading if it were.

NICELY done.

I'm up to chapter six and I'm LOVIN it! I love the way they bicker back and forth, it's keeping me in stitches!! Oh and I positively loved loved the way you slipped in the You may be right, I may be crazy. . .I love that song!!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! I'M BEGGING YOU!!

Wow! I absolutely love this story. It is one of the best I have read in a long time. I hope you finish it soon! I love the way you portray the characters. It is a very satisfying read. :p

That was wonderful! Very much enjoyed the banter, and the fact that Inuyasha is loyal enough that he's not automatically ditching kikyo. I am so looking forward to seeing how this progresses! The parents are priceless