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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMFG MORE!
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great job with chapter 18... Loved it! I do recommend proofreading your chapters, I notice you really don't make spelling errors but you do make some typos. Once you're finished with a chapter, reread it and look for things like "you" instead of "your" (I noticed you made this typo at the start of chapter 17 as well). Despite the minor typos and the occasional grammatical error (you roll onto something, not unto), it was still an awesome chapter, good job! Can't wait for more!
-xfx-
-xfx-
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October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh, sooo cute. I wonder what type of relationship Sesshomaru is after. I can't wait to read more. This is a very good story.
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HOORAY!!!
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
out of all the fanficts that i have read that arnt based on the story itself this has 2 b the best
keep writing
lov the story
keep writing
lov the story
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YES!!! FINALLY!!! THEY ADMITTED IT!!! THANK GOD! Im soooo excited now!! but you left us hanging. :-(. Now i have to wait till next chapter to see what happens. But i cant wait! It's very suspensful and thats hard to pull off.
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MORE, I NEED MORE!
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
CONTIUNE!!! I love this story. You gotta continue or I'll die.
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October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great job writing this story, it was really well written and I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter... please update soon!
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October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!