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by yannaenoah

person twilight kiss
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this was a great story i think you could have improved it however with more detail and more of what inuyasha was thinking. but other than that it was wonderful i love how you created the love story between them starting off as mere friends falling into the category of passionate lovers also you made shessomaru more humane which is a plus (i think) overall its great and you did a wonderful job...
jus wondering will there be more chapters?
person ???
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
does this mean no lemon!!!!! i hope you'll still post the lemon....the relationship between Inuyasha and Kagome was just getting to that point, and............please say there will still be a lemon!!!!!! fanfiction doesn't allow them from what i've heard....sad so sad...22 chapters and you had to switch it on the 23rd where the lemon was suppose to be.......i love your story and i'd hate to see it lose its fire. good luck with either way you go though.
person TapTheMemoryBank
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GEEEEENNNNNIIIIIOOOOOOUUUUUUUSSSSSSSSS!!! BEST DAMN STORY I'VE READ IN A LONG TIME!!! You have a great story line, good strong characters, and everything else to make this an unforgettable story! Awesome job!!! Continue as soon as you possibly can!! BEEEAAUUTIIIFUULLL!!!!!
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wo0t for updates! please update again!!! i cant wait! =)
person BastardOmega
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter, but of course i/all will want u to update ASAFP. till next time.

Peace & Love BastardOmega
person Jessa
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey it was great love to read more see ya
person fire_eyez
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aww!!!that was cute!! I loved it.
person Pucie
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. . . .that was so beautiful!! *sniffles* I got all emo and everything!!
person angelevie (NSI)
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was great!! Why did you have to stop there?? Ihope you get a chance to update again soon.
person JKS
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!!! I like so totally love ur story. Mine was a really bad drag. I'm sure you've probably read it....sorry about that embarassment. Anywayz...kepp up the good work!!!