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by rinflowers1986

person WeIrDpErSoN
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it! So very interesting. I hope you get better soon and are able to update. I hate asking for updates.. ACtually i don't think I ever have but with this one.. It's rather interesting, but whenever you update I'll be there waiting to read and review! Love it!! Can't wait for more. Peace!
person random person #351
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kouga should be dominant. It's sweeter. Especially for this story.
person acr
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good update! Usually in these Inuyasha-slave fics, Sesshomaru has sold him, which I don't think is very IC for him. He'd kill him first. Your system is well-thought out and realistic. Though how do they keep the Hanyou undercontrol? Are their demons at the auction house, or some kind of magic wards that prevent a mass break out/killing spree?

And btw, why do you add onto the end of the 1st chapter rather than making a new one?
person Jonouchi_mutt
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kouga should be seme pleaseeeeee I love it I want to read so much more but im so tired im going to bed now please update! and email me update please!
person Shadowwolf
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah... Let Kouga be seme this time, but only once. ;->
person Robin
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, lovely! I like it very much. Keep going, it's great! Also, might I say that Kouga does indeed deserve one seme day every now and again. (wink wink)
person acr
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great fic. I already reviewed it, but this has been bugging me. I think you meant 'Fair Game' not 'Free game'. I am very curious to learn more about this world you have created. It is very interesting.
person Anon
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You...You are evil. I want you to know that. What kind of ending was that!?!?! *wails* God- it's been a long time since I've been on the recieving end of an evil cliff hanger...and I dont like it! (Obviously I love the story to death...I'm just frustrated by the evil end!)

Awesome job! But hurry up and post the next chapter or imma cry. :-(
person malimillions
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn, this is so, so bloody fantastic! Excellent work, girl!

Oh, and it would be cool if inuyasha was the uke in this one....
person sinheart
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohh please please update soon. this story is absolutley fabulous! i love it, so please keep writing!