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by rinflowers1986

person kallipso
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a fablous story I love the way that it has come out so far. I want to see more to come. I can't wait to see Sesshoumaru the avenging angel that comes for his brother to find him gone. Please continue to write this great story.
person acr
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good chapter! Though some of your descriptions are just a *touch* over the top. Like the descriptions of Kouga's eyes and the 'ballet of sunbeams'.
person Sekre
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ack, poor Yasha .. glad he got Kouga there :) Loved the chapter.
person Miyo
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohh I cant wait for your next update!! Im already addicted!! *twitches* I need more... <3
person acr
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Get well soon! Make sue to take good care of yourself.
person jade
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i just read this and loved it soo and realised it was by you again (i just read another one of ur stories).. ahhhh i neeeeed moreeeeee...
person Sekre
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it ^^ Hope your arm heals smoothly
person Robin
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aw... no writing? No drawing? That's horrid! I'm sorry for you. Hurry and get better, but in the meantime I can wait for my Yasha fix. I'm a patient girl. *grins*
person venus
schedule September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey, i love this story. its just the kind i've been looking to read for -counts how long- at least 4 weeks. anyway, i hope you update this soon, i can't wait to see what happens next! good luck!
~venus
person inushi
schedule September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha! ................... oh sorry heh i loved it!don't get me wrong i realy do! it's just that oh never mind.i loved it!