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I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

i like this story, but u should try slowing down and reading over ur stuff more, i noticed a few mistakes, but it is very good otherwise...and i dont mind u doing my challenge. ^.^ go right ahead and have fun!!

I'm sorry, sure it's a great storyline and everything, but I couldn't read past the third chapter. Your paragraphing is worse than a tenyearold's. Some pieces could have been more detailed. I know it's not PWP, but I'd like to call it PWLP - Porn with little plot. And that's about what you'll get from me

OMG I freaked out in the begining when you said that he couldnt get it up for Kagome

UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!!!! I BEG OF YOU!!! *glomp*

YAY there going to do it alright, i hope you make it good ^^ lol i cant wait till you up date an i hope its soon iam leveing in 2 days so i hope i can see an up date befor then plz plz plz plz thank you

Can u try to keep the sentences in paragraph because I have to keep scrolling side to side but other then that One of the best Inu/Kag stories on this site:)

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I'm not flamming, I don't have any reason to. I haven't read
your story, but I will after work tonight. What I find
discouraging, however, is the fact that you rely on reviews
to continue your work. Of course, review's give the author
their motivation. It's always nice to see that your work
is appreciated. You seem to like this story, and continued
it up to 6 chapters with only one review. It seems to me
that you're enjoying what you're doing. Don't be discouraged
by the lack of reviews. Finish this. Especially if you're
somewhat passionate about it.

Again, I will give this a real review tonight, after work.

Good story, but damn it, why did you have to do a cliffy. Well, I'll be checking up. Good job.