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for Fate's Mistake

by kimisan

person MIAmax(nsi)
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I wish you would write more of this, but i can't force you, and the story itself is wonderful
person Shiva
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please make a sequel!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!
person Zed
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! This fic is awesome!!! You sshould make a sequel!!!
person Shanalir
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm reviewing again, because I keep coming back to this story and rereading it. This really is one of the greatest crossover one-shots I've ever read. I don't want to push, but I really can't help it. This would really, really be a great multi-chapter fic, or even a really great two-shot! It almost hangs at the end, and personally, I'm willing to beg for a continuation. Bsides, she works with Kurama! Won't she bump into him at some point, even if they only work in the same building?
person L.L.
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It think it would be nice if you continued it and had them meet up with her later after she gave birth. That would be an interesting story and I can imagine them wanting to care for it to, but she won't go to them for money. Could you maybe do a sequal?
person marie
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Keep writing this is amazing, I can't wait for the next chapter, WRITE!!!
person Yusuke's Lover
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think you Should Add More Please
person Amy
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to write some more
person scarecrow
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy your story you have a good plot line. but I do ask you this please add another chapter
person Katie
schedule September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ARG! Another brilliant one-shot from you and I'm left clawing at the computer screen for more that won't come. Fuck that was hot! Thank you! :D