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for Fate's Mistake

by kimisan

person dejaz
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really liked this one shot but i really wish there were more to it. like if koenma sent the boys to investigate the shrine or something so they'd be able to meet with kagome again. (maybe have more fun~)anyway, i loved it!
person Epiphany
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*chuckles* For some reason, all I can think is that if either Yusuke or Kurama ran into (or saw) Kagome during the pregnancy, the two would wind up deciding to corner her and convince her to let them be a more solid presence in her life and the baby's life. And not to think of continuing their rather unique association as "breaking them up" so much as "agreeing to be their surrogate" so they can have kids as a couple. Especially since she would be utterly paranoid about coming between them given her past experience with her own little triangle. Although when explaining the relationship to others, they'd likely have to take the diplomatic route and say something like the two potential papas mixed their "samples" together for insemination to make sure the baby's paternal influence was a surprise.
person kogome
schedule January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please update soon! I really want to see if they meet her and find out shes having their baby!!!
person whirleeq
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS FRICKEN HOT! You should really write a sequel... the plot bunnies are ENDLESS... can you imagine Kagome's surprise when she gives birth to a hanyou? Or if the child favors Kurama, and Yumi does the math and figures out just exactly how Kagome talked her way out of jail? ;) Seriously, you should write a sequel...
person kags
schedule September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE CONTINUE this story its really good
person minny
schedule March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG I loved it...IT had all the elements I love. U did great please make more!!!!need closure... need it!!!!
person Dee Dee
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for you to update this story because it is the greatest!! I mean Kurama, Youske, and Kagome!? I mean who woulda thunk it? Although between the three of them it will be the most adorable baby ever to be born on this Earth!! PLEASE HURRY?!?! This story just got very interesting!
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I know that every review so far has begged for at least a sequel, and though I hate being redundant, PLEASE MAKE A SEQUEL.The story was awesome but come on that was a totally evil ending!
person kogme
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
person Tater
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omggg that was really good is there a second part to it? if not there should be. Its Awesome