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for The Ark

by Dunkelgelb

person Anonymous
schedule July 6, 2018 at 12:00 AM
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person OriginalSinner :P
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey you... I've finally gotten back to where I left off! Wows sweetpea... I would gnaw off my right arm just to jump inside your talented head for a day... sheesh... even just a few hours... heheheh... Sinner would have lots of fun playing with the muses ~_^

You have put soooo much thought into this story hey? I so hope that you do find some time to get it finished... I know how busy you're going to be and you're prolly just chillin now and catching up with friends and family now you're on your break *gods I hope you're a fast typer!! hehehe* You've left us with heaps of meat to chew on *swats at that nasty inner-hentai* ~_^... Uhms now... what can I say??? As always you've managed to blow my mind with your mastery of the english language... you would have to be one of the most sensual males I have ever encountered... and after having your image in my head I've been blushing like an idiot at any hint of lemon... *dohs* hehehe... tis like getting sprung masturabating or something by a familiar stranger if that makes sense bahahaha... blah....to think that inside that sweet, innocent and terribly handsome head of your lurks a hentai of behemoth proportion *tut tut tut... shakes head and raises eyebrow*... Who would've ever guessed ~_^ hehe... Oh gods... now I've got "Skeleton's of Society" playing around in my head at them mention of Seasons of the Abyss *exquisite taste sweetpea*... Ohs! And Iron Maidens Somewhere in Time!!! Blah... superhappyfunslide!! CHF rox! hehehe... Okies... Sinner's gonna go and be a deev and gaff tape herself onto the lounge so I don't slide off as I keep on teasing that nasty inner-hentai of mine with some more chapters... ^_~

Peace mungbean :P
person Sinner
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! O..M..G.. @_@!! Go get him Goku!!! Smite his ass some! *bottom lip trembles :P* Poor 17...

CHF... these incomplete chapters are getting beyond being a tease... uhms... thank god you provided the time line so I can go back and read Battlefield again and try and work out what is what...
person Sinner
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6 went off man! That was cool yeah? So descriptive yet concise... ohs... and yeah... gotta love them brain control leaches aye hehehehee :P

You're a gamer aren't you hehehe...
person YoukaiFate
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
First, I want to wish you luck in what you've chosen to do. Basic's no picnic, but worth it in the end. :)

Now to beg.

PLEASE GAWD IN HEAVEN ABOVE FINISH THAT SEVENTEEN/KAGURA LEMON. Oh, and the Sesshy/Seventeen/Kagura. Hot and holy fart, but those were damn good! And to be cut off like that! SHEESH! I had to resort to several cold, icy cold showers. FARGH! Not nice!

I am eager to read your fic. I hope you have ample free time, when able, to continue.

Fate
person Original Sinner
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Good God is that dramatic enough... I'm freakn' crying now!
person OriginalSinner
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy... I hope you know what you're doing sweetpea... I wasn't joking when I said I was crying...

I used to go out with an AJ here in Australia... it didn't last though cos I was selfish and couldn't handle the thought of him having the short life expectancy as I believed he would. Well, reality proved me wrong. He is safe and well in the Solomon Islands as a recon scout... God only knows if he's climbed any higer up the heirarchy, but all I know is that even though I haven't seen him for years, I still think about him and pray for his safety as I will yours...

I haven't even read the rest of this "Ark"... I'm still gob-smacked by the first chapter. Dear 'Charging Handles Forward', know that you shall be dearly missed and that I will be praying for you too sweetpea...

I can't write anymore cos I'm snotting and tearing all over the shop and really need a tissue...

Peace babe...

The Sinner xxxx
person inuyoukai8
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HEY! WHAT!? E-mail bubba so we can exchange some info please?