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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yecchh....you never actually said in your warning that there was gonna be some "smokin' hot" pee-drinking in the last chapter....i'm never thinking about those two in the same way again...
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
'WOW'!!! THAT'S MY REVIEW!
I JUST HOPE THAT SESSHY REVEALS THE SECRETS OF HIS PAST ABOUT 'WHY HE HATE INUYASHA SO MUCH'
IN THE OTHER HAND... WHAT INU DID WAS WROSE!!!.... BUT I DON'T BLAME SESSHY, BECAUSE IT'S NOT SO SIMPLE TO RESTRAIN THE PHYSICAL NECCCESITIES....
I JUST HOPE THAT SESSHY REVEALS THE SECRETS OF HIS PAST ABOUT 'WHY HE HATE INUYASHA SO MUCH'
IN THE OTHER HAND... WHAT INU DID WAS WROSE!!!.... BUT I DON'T BLAME SESSHY, BECAUSE IT'S NOT SO SIMPLE TO RESTRAIN THE PHYSICAL NECCCESITIES....
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July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice story poor sesshomaru! i hope that him and inu will be together
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July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. There are very few of them out there that have Inuyasha as the dominant partner. I can appreciate his motivation as well--after being beaten by Sesshomaru for countless years, he finally wants some payback. Sesshomaru is rather in character in that he refuses to submit, but I do wonder how long either brother will remain unaffected (or remain unaware of their attraction) by the other? Good story and I look forward to reading more.
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July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well the title worried me, but the text itself seems to be free from typos and grammatical errors.
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July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what an interesting story. i like what you are
doing. i hope you update soon. i want to see
what inuyasha will do next to sesshomaru.
doing. i hope you update soon. i want to see
what inuyasha will do next to sesshomaru.
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July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it's good but i think it needs to be beta'd. and if it is, you need a better beta.
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July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh....my my. this is certainly interesting. Only thing wrong I could see was some minor spelling errors. Keep it up, you've got me hooked for the next chappie. =D
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July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Inuyasha is quite OOC. There is almost no difference between him and Sesshomaru
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July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol yea I know. Thzts sorta the point :) showing sessy what it feels like when he treats hm also there' ssame family so that coldness has to come from somewhere.lol dont worry its story development. all will be explained as the story progresses. thank you soo much for reading ill write more later tonight. just figuring out the best way to bring out the story in my mind effectively