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for Bets N Dares

by Mustang

person kawaii-miko
schedule September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hahahahhahahha go miroku being a perv will help your friends get what they work
(an excuse to perv on the foot ball team hehehe)
person Crystal*Brite
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great chappie! i hope inu wins!{grins evilly}
person Crystal*Brite
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it was perfect!But the lemon coulda been a little mo' descriptive ,but it was your first so i'll go easy on the comments
person Josh
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How about a story for the girls to get back at the boys. A female version of there bet'n'dare for them to do while they have to let the guys do something to them that they wouldn't let happen.
person BastardOmega
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
flying fuck that was greate, it was the perfect begining of a relasnship and a longterm story but it's ok if u stop now, i cant belive miroku managed it but it made the story complet.
BUT if u ever get bord try to continu or make moor of thows fic's.

bastardomega@yahoo.com mail me of your new work and progress if u will be soooooo kind XD

Peace & Love BastardOmega
person Josh
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey nice story like the Dare from Miroku and Inuyasha. Good thing she wanted him to grab her like that. Hope to see what Miroku and Sango will do after there lil ordeal. Hope to see an update of this story soon from you keep up the good work and the grammar was pretty good too don't know but a few were misspelled but I knew what you were saying so keep up the good work. JOSH
person Little Jack 2
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh man that was great,I just loved how Kagome thought that it was Miroku who grabbed her boobs.It was also a great lemon too.
person Lynn
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
I'm soooo curious! How will Kagome take it when InuYasha grabs her tits? That's such a lol schene! I'm falling off of the chair just thinking about it! Or will Miroku lose in the final moments? :D Write more soon!
person Mustang
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Bettychan when you can spell Grammar Right then i'll take your advice in the mean time shut up
person Little Jack 2
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh man I can't wait to see what happens next especially since Kagome and Sango know about the little bet.I still want Miroku to win the bet.