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for Past Lives, Current Conflictions

by drcomalfy

person Vyper
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this it is quite good. Please keep writing.
person KYumi
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! That was seriously hot. As was the last chapter. But very tender and in someways heart-wrenching. Poor Dad! He's condemned himself to a life of misery. Now that's love... Looking forward to more. Update soon, please.
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a really great story. Past smut would be interestting. I am looking forword to what Dad has to say.
person Stank You
schedule June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
:does a happy dance and then says in a sing song voice: Awesome!
person Stank You
schedule June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE Eddie Izzard! He is so fucking hilarious and I remember that 'on the moon with Steve' bit. Oh, and this story just gets better with each chapter. Keep it up. ^-^
person Stank You
schedule June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Most definately. There should be a smut chapter dedicated to the past selves. I was actually hoping that it would be in chapter nine but oh well.
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hhmmm well i'm more feeling the 'present' day ones. can THEY have sex?! *grins* Thats what i want hehe. But if not i GUESS i'll settle for the past selves doing the horizontal boogie lol (past yasha seems like he'd be an active uke which is always fun). I miss present inu tho, *whimpers* seems he's been gone forever. More Present Selves!! yeah! and their adorable trying to figure out what's going on between them.
person Samira
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
One of my favorite chapters so far. ^^

I really liked getting to see how the past selves interacted. Sesshoumaru tricking Inuyasha in the shower was something I can definitely see him doing, the mentioning of Inuyasha's ears always makes me do a little happy dance in my head. I love the line about who holds the dominance in the relationship, priceless.

Smut between the past selves would be a nice distraction while we wait for the current selves to get together. *evil grin*
person Iyasu
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've just now found this fic, and I have to say, I love it (when I can stop laughing or drooling to actually say so). I looked at the fanart too, and it is absolutely marvelous. The idea isn't an original one, but the way you have portrayed it is. Oh, and I read the question. Sure, why not give them some smut? Lord knows they need it the way they're jumping the current vessels...
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmmm. That was a very yummy chapter, my dear. My favorite exchange definitely has to be this one right here...

“Yes, if you want to be technical, you raped yourself,"
“Well, I wouldn’t mind... raping you, right now, here on this stairwell,”

Heehee. Even I blushed reflexively. And that's hard to make me do!

Of course, you need to do a scene of the Past Selves. They wouldn't be in there, if they weren't gonna boff like bunnies, now would they? *eyes you deviously* Seriously, love. You can't mention something like that, and then make it optional. I say sex for all. Past selves, present selves, past/present selves. As much sex as the story needs, and no more, no less, depending on whether or not you want a little plot with your sex, or a little sex with your plot. *bows* I make that decision yours, but I like their dynamics. Yes, the Inu and Sess coming to terms with their feelings for one another will be sweet, and cute, and sexy, but...we also have two very sexy versions of the two of them with little holding them back. Sex now and sex later. Oh god. Just as long as there's sex!

*giggles* I'm done now.

And of course, the ending...just makes it. I can't wait!

*huggles**lurves**glomps*