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for Past Lives, Current Conflictions

by drcomalfy

person Merely Truth
schedule June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can say I like this story. Please, explain me : will you never put the following chapters on AFF ? I'm french, and have sometimes difficulties to understand how things are going on...

Thank you

Bonjour de la France

Merely Truth
schedule May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
update update pleeeeeeeaaaasssseee update u can't leave the suspense hanging like that.
person jahloveangel
schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry, the first thing I thought once I finished that chapter was "Damn. Sesshoumaru has got to be horny to go jack off just after he finished with Inuyasha. And I thought Inuyasha was the one in heat!" lol

Otherwise, wonderful chapter. ^^

The present selves are so cute when they're feeling awkward. It's sad to know they're both in love with each other but also both convinced the other one hates them. I almost wish their father would smack their heads together or something.

I'm wondering if either of the past selves will let them know their bodies haven't had sex with each other yet? It seems cruel to let them think they have.
person Iyasu
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*huge grin* For a moment there I had forgotten about this because nothing had been said about it in so long. I'm glad that it's been updated. I love that part at the end with Sesshomaru. I wonder what Inuyasha's going to do.
person jenny
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!!!! Thats all I have to say. :)
person Anon
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
haha smut
person previously_recorded
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG THEY FINALLY DID SOMETHING! I'm so proud of you! that was awesome, and I thought the shower scene was real at first
you're a tease!!! ANd Sesshomaru lurves his baby brother!!!! AND AND...I WANT MORE GOD DAMMIT!!!!!
Things are starting to come together so nicely, and you can so that they've crossed a lot of the emotional bridges that have
kept them apart until now...and write more!!!!!!!!! it was sooooo hot! I want Sesshomaru to dry hump me like that!
person DemonGoddess061
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Looky! I can actually post an anon review!!!!

Anyway, as always, enjoyed your writing. "Lord Stick up his Ass", eh? You had 'em both plenty embarrassed with each other, among other things....lol ^-^
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It is just so good!
I love this story.
schedule September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved the update and the answers to some of the questions.