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Yes! thanks!! you finally updated!! Geez you really need to write some lemons! how could you cut it off like that!!! but i have to admit it was a good chapter. >_< now i can't wait for more!! lemon!!!!!!!!! need lemons!!! rawwr! *would be willing to help you out if you needed a lemon scene co-writer*

It was about damn time that you updated! Anywho... Yes... I think it's funny and cute that Sesshoumaru scratches his ear whenever he's nervous. I didn't get it until I connected the dots... Update soon before you go back to school.

Oh, Dembo! You don't suck. (Sess does that) You just needed to finish them off. Heh. Ok, I'm done with the off color jokes. No I'm not...who the hell am I kidding?!? Ooooohhh! and stupid InuT gets in the way of everything doesn't he? How dare he come home in the heat of the moment. In fact, I'm suprised that he doesn't have shower cameras installed and would have watched and waited until they were done (why else would you have an f*ing 5 man shower....oh Daddy dear?....what where you thinking?!?)

Yes, and I shall reiterate that the shower scene was hot. Like it was really really hot. It definitely woke me up before class. I thank you for that.

I will tell you to see this story through to the end. I will not, however, tell you to update soon. Because, then that means that I have to update soon. And...well, I'm still beating you right now on the length between updates...but I am going to work on it some tonight and I want to finish the next installment soon. Oh let's just say that the world's strangest author's note will be affixed to ch 12.

So...in short...I love it. You are not awkward at all with the citrusy things. You are rather sweet about it, lol. Update when you can...stupid school. Hell, update a bunch in the summer. But you cannot stop this one. Not until it's finished. *growls* Nobody likes an unfinished fic. *glares*

Yay!!!!!! DEMBO LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

OH KAMI, i was drooling!!! haha wow wow WHOA!! That was just incredible, sooo incredibly delicious and uhhhhh. I don't even have words OMG. Don't stop whatever you do, just don't stop, you cant stop, I think I would die if you did (seriously). I was sooo glued to my screen, and I screamed when Dad came home. Parents, such a boner killer lol. This was very worth waiting for. You rock so hard, I could just hug and squeeze the life outta ya, but then you couldn't write anymore so I wont. O:-) No doubts- you are doing an awesome job,.

Damn, just when it was really getting good! Their father just had to come home right then, huh? Oh well, great chapter! There's nothing like good clean fun, I always say! Don't wait so long to update~ B reading U!

I STILL can't believe you left it there! (grumbles at the Dembo) Now am I gonna have to try as hard as
I did last time to get you to update...because trust me that was a lot of work! But hey it had results,
so I suppose if it's necassary it'll have to be done. Oh and I love this chapter...even if the promised
smex wasn't included lol...it was still hot as hell. And YES I loved Sesshomaru's nervous twitch...it's so
adorable...and I loved how he practically cracked the shower in an attempt to get away from Inuyasha, because I think
that although he tries to act like he doesn't give a shit...Sesshomaru is really way more infatuated than Inuyasha ever
could be...and it was sooooo cute how jumped apart when Inutaishou interrupted...total hater of him in this chapter btw
He interrupted the smut! But yeah, I can't wait till the next chapter!

yay!! two updates in one day you totaly rock ^_~ and you so don't suck at smut scenes me thinks you should write more maybe with a bit more?? possibly?? pleeeeaaaasssee?? lol! anyways another awesome chapter!

Manda

Thank you for updating! Yeah, it's really hard when there's just too much to do, eh? I truly enjoy this story, so I would love to see it continue. I've put you on my list of favorite yaoi already! You've gotta finish! Please, please! I liked the smut scenese JUST fine. really, feel free to do as MANY as you'd like. that'd be just fine, LOL. Yes, I enjoyed both sessh and inu's nervous habits. I think little details like that really add something to the story. It's just fun, and kind of endearing, etc...

I look forward to more! Just knowing that you've got a lot going on makes me much more patient. As long as it's not just abandoned in the waste bin, I'll wait for the next update!!

Ah, you must continue writing! Even if the updates are sparse 'cause they're just so damn good. ^^ I was drooling throughout the whole chapter.

so you say your not good at smut sceans..well maybe thats true but thats not smut..you put their love/desire for each other in this story..i love it..keep it burning girl..this is a very good story