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by XxSangoxX

person Phelony
schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What an evil author you are! Ending your chapter there! Ugh.
Hehe. Very well written, I LOVE it! Please update soon!
schedule March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, what the? Was that Sesshoumaru in the dark, hiding out? grrrr!!! great story, i need a sequel. lol :)
person Anon
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It seems such a shame to shatter such a happy little existence - especially when it is so well deserved, but nonetheless I eagerly await an update, even if it be only out of morbid curiosity;)
schedule March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this.

Looking forward to more.

^_^
person Sherry
schedule March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutly adore your story and cant wait until the next chapter comes out! I know who the stalker is (unless you made it someone that I dont really expect!)and i really want to know what happens when he takes her or maybe you should make it where he tries to take her and fails but then comes back later and this time succeeds? Just something to think about and i will stop rambling now. Great story and all that!
person Tesra54
schedule March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this plot. Please don't give up on it! Update soon because I'll be checking every day. Try to make the chapters longer. Thanks.
person Moon
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well lol wat can i say ur storys very good lol i just hope dat kagome doesnt get pregnant wen kouga i think its him the one that rapes her rape her lol

ur story rocks lol update soon please
thanks
person madmiko
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw! The second chapter was so good! Their playfulness is fun, and their passion and love for each other was great to see. From the story's summary, I know what's coming, but it's really nice to see them so happy with each other right now.
person madmiko
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved chapters 3 and 4! You've set up their relationship so nicely. Inuyasha's comment to Miroku -- when they were talking about being Dads and starting families -- that they sounded like women was hilarious! Did both couples go to sleep in the same room? I thought when you described the cleaning that there were 2 bedrooms. (Maybe not.) Anyway, I see we're getting to the dark, angsty part soon. I just hope Kagome doesn't get pregnant with Kouga's baby. THAT would be really hard for them to take, wouldn't it?
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sigh you are funny chrystal... just read em all.